http://g-odalisque13.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] g-odalisque13.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] airplanewishes 2013-04-03 12:02 am (UTC)

More cute!
I read this on the train so i'm commenting on my phone which means i can't quote the part i wanted to.
But! I will say that the scene where joonmyun tells jongdae to close his eyes and they almost kiss but don't was just fjggufig. So intense and heady and romantic and argh b/c they didn't end up kissing lol.
I have to say that you're really good at writing kisses. Which i always struggle with. Honestly, i find smut easier than just a simple kiss to write. Idek. But you do it it perfectly.
You are making me crave romance in my life! Lmao.
Loved this series!

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