woa woa woa! i'm speechless right now but really i really cant just leave without even saying anything after reading this beautiful fiction i've ever read.
Firstly thank you so much for choosing baekchen as the main pairing. It's baekchen that lead me to find this fic.
Oh really this story is such a masterpiece. Well written, oh how I love your writing style. Great storyline.. you made sense of all the settings and using them to send story's messages wonderfully, like relating swimming and such with all conflicts in the story. All of them had correlation. This is not like other romance story. This is beautiful and smart on the same time. All of the feelings are in the right proportion. Eventhough this story is so long like a road, I could enjoy reading word after word, not get bored even a bit. And the feelings.. I get all the emotions verry well, mostly in Jondae's position of course.
last.. I really envy your writing skill. This gives me courage to be able writing a story like this.
Thank you so much for writing and sharing this!